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Character/Story concepts (need input)

Thu Nov 19, 2009, 9:52 AM
I've been wanting to write a story for quite a while now, and I've finally come up with some ideas. I'm looking for some ideas and suggestions, so post any ideas you have in the comments and I'll check them out. Names are all pending, just in case I accidentally used someone else's names. Here's what I got so far:

It's a classic good versus evil story, a team of female super heroes versus a group of female super villains (names of groups pending). The story will detail one of their battles and will be full of cartoonish violence and mischief (flattening, expanding, squash and stretch stuff). I plan to put the heroes at more of a disadvantage then the villains and try to go for a creative outcome.

Hero Group:

Leader- Extendica: A master of her body, Extendica can stretch and meld her body to any form or size she'd like and is able to hold her form pretty well without much strain on her body. She's the bravest of the group and generally the most competent. She's able to use her talents to escape simple traps easily, but has trouble keep her group in line, which usually leads to her demise. She wears a black cat burglar mask with a yellow lining near her eyes with a yellow E pointing towards her nose at the outmost edge of each side. She has dark brown eyes and inwardly curved hair that goes down to shoulder length. She wears a bright yellow tight jumpsuit with black gloves and boots, and has a black band as her belt. Below the belt and along her thighs, her tights have black horizontal stripes that become thinner as they travel down her thigh. (more elements made be added to her costume, like a team logo)

The Cheerleaders: A group of four teenage girls that have decided to join up with Extendica to fight crime. There names are Cindy (brown hair, slightly tanned skin), Kristie (blond hair, blue eyes), Kimy (freckled skin, red hair), and Sandy (black hair, dark blue eyes). They all dress in their favorite primary color (need to figure out what color goes to who) in a general uniform of skirts and the top half of a jumpsuit. They arn't very smart and tend to get themselves into trouble pretty easily. At least one of them will blunder into a situation carelessly most of the time. This tends to make Extendica's job harder, but not always. They are loyal to each other and Extendica, and know at least some martial arts, making them formidable when they get their act together (which they rarely do XD).

Villain Group:

Leader- Big Bessie: A former female wrestler turned criminal, Bessie leads the group to their dirty deeds. She's incredibly overweight, at somewhere between 400-500 pounds, with most of it in her oversized butt. She uses her wrestling techniques (along with some of her own tricks) and her massive size to crush anyone who gets in her way. She finds great joy in smashing the heroes paper thin, and tries to find the most humiliating way to do so. Her teammates will often fight with her over the leader position, with mixed results. She has light skin with rosy red cheeks and curly orange hair that looks a lot like a split afro. She wears a fully body pale yellow leotard with small purple polka dots along with purple gloves and boots. Before a fight starts, she usually puts on some black goggles (she says it's for eye protection, but she mostly wears them for style ;p).

Domme-nique: A powerful female soccerer, Dominique decided to use her powers to commit crimes and became Domme-nique. She's power hungry and greedy, using any means necessary to get what she wants (which is usually bad news for whoever stands in her way). Her magic abilities include levitation, telekinesis, and (admittedly weak) mind control. She can also change the shape and form of nearly any object (including our hapless heroes). She has long straight jet black hair, and skin so pale it has a hint of blue to it. Her eyes are dark red, and her lips always have her black lipstick on them. She wears a long thin black dress with a red design in the center (still pending what it is) that has a slit along each side starting at her hip, with black stockings underneath. She also wears thin black gloves and black high heeled boots.

Crazy Anne: A scientist gone mad, Anne has adopted her talents to the crime world. She's a master with gadgets, able to create and use items like shrink rays, freeze beams, flamethrowers, etc. Her large intellect allows her to create various traps for our heroes, though her madness sometimes gets the best of her and she triggers her own traps. Her plans are usually long and drawn out, but have a tendency to get the heroes right where she wants them. Her lab tends to be the base of operations for the villain team, and is a common place of attack and infiltration for the heroes. Her hair is orange and shoulder length, though tends to get ruffled and crazy looking when plans go sour. Her eyes are a fair blue color, with slight freckles along her eye bags. She has a white doctor's coat with a white tee shirt and black slacks, topped with somewhat dark green gloves and shoes. She is usually doning some sort of protective eyewear, which changes depending on what gadget she's usually at the moment.

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